She Is A Beautiful Magnet…

There is something about Ruth

That captures your attention when you look at her

A forceful power that makes you gravitate towards her

Something that instantly electrocutes you

As you bump into her on the stairways

In the malls and anywhere you find her

Something that makes you turn around to have another glimpse of her

Something magnetic about her


Ruth is exquisitely gorgeous and graceful

Stunningly attractive and charming

She is a beautiful magnet



Submitted for the Daily Prompt – Magnet.

Peace and Love!

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19 thoughts on “She Is A Beautiful Magnet…

      1. Certainly. “Something that instantly electrocutes you” can be said to be shocking. There are other examples fro the poem but one should suffice. I was being ironic which is my wont to do. I like the poem and meant no offences. Have a blessed day!

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      2. I don’t feel offended ‘cos I like honest feedbacks on my works. We may not always get it ‘so right’ with our choice of words all of the times and that’s why there is always the edit button. On the contrary, I liked that you clarified this. Thank you, Benn. 🙂

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    1. Thank you so much. I’m happy you liked the poem. Sure, with some hard work we can get to that position where heads turn cos of our presence. And it doesn’t have to be by physical beauty. Just being a success in life is magnetic as one becomes a household name.


      1. Aawww… You’re most welcome. I appreciate those words. It’s a pleasure to know you and your wonderful platform. Thanks. Have a blessed day. 🙂


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